EPIC

WIN.

Lol.

I hate those beggers and those retarded/drunk/weird/annoying/anorexi c/ things that push you when you get near them for no reason what so ever.

Okay, I'll be the first comment then.

Kay, the intro is quite long, it gets boring.. but is nice, has a nice pad (reminds me of Fable II intro music, actually, sounds like the exact same notes.)
The BooBass sounds REALLY out of place. almost sharp in pitch..
Hi hat needs some reverb
I'm liking the beginning melody
The key change could be better more smoother..
Tempo change was refreshing.
The Snare needs to have a limiter
Try using a multiband compressor and a fruity limiter on your master channel because everything is 'distorting' needs a compressor badly.
You should almost never have just 1 synth playing by itself, have something helping it along. (drums don't exactly count in this context)
Don't forget balance.. Your melody is being drowned out by a counter melody...in the second verse
automation is key!
Work on your middle melody, you sorta change key mid melody, sound out of place...
Outro is nice but could use a little more pizaz

Keep at it!!
I listened to the ENTIRE song just as I would want people to do to mine..
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Please.

Please tell me where you got the vocal samples for this.. I'd need them for my song.

Eh.

Sounds like an attempt of one of those one hit wonder catchy melodies.
But unfortunately for you that melody has already been taken by another song.

Some original stuff would be nice.